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   You knew everyone was talking about it, a new student was coming to the school. No one cared to tell you, you actually didn't care at all. You looked out the window and listened to Breaking Benjamin. You felt alone at your school since everyone that liked you graduated that year before. Hishschool seemed like hell to you, you didn't expect someone to save you but that was going to change after today.


    "Students! We have a new student, please introduce yourself young man." The teacher said, you put your iPod away and looked up at the man. The boy walked in and you started to blush, this has never happened to you ever! All the girls squeeled; as expected, the boy walked the the front of the class.


    "Hey yo! The names Alfred F. Jones and I will be joining your class from now on!" He said making a gun with his hands, he got his fan club after that. You looked back at the window to look at the beautiful blue sky, you smiled to see the beauty. Alfred saw you smile and he blushed a little, he looked at the teacher.


    "Um Miss...may I sit by that girl by the window?" He asked pointing at you, your eyes widen and you quickly looked at the teacher.

 

    "Sure,  you may." The teacher said smiling, all the girls were glaring at you; you slid down in your seat. You hated this, why did he have to pick you! You hated this, you avoided to talk to people your whole life, well, some just came to you and you talked quietly to them so no one else could hear your voice.


    "Hey, I'm sorry for embarrassing you but your very pretty...um...whats your name?" He asked quietly, you wrote down your answer.


    "My name is _______ _______. Don't expect to hear my voice, I won't talk." Alfred read, his eyes widen at the answer.


    "So, ________, why don't you talk to people? I mean, you seem nice but a little shy. "



    "Its because people hate me, they have always blamed me for their troubles and I don't care if you think thats not true. The popular girls will try something to blame me, just watch. Its best if you leave me alone."
Alfred read and looked up the girls. He felt ashamed of imperessing them earlier but he had to put on an act to see what they are really like.


         ----Time Skip----      



    Its now lunch time, you walked away before Alfred could get back. As you were walking and listening to (fav rock band) with your lunch and sketch pad. You were surrounded by the popluar girls.


    "Listen _______, don't get your hopes up that Alfred will ever like you, don't talk to him or write to him in class. Your such a hopeless girl and no one will ever like you, your such a freak" One of the girls said pushing you after you nodded in agreement and walked away. You got up and walked up to the roof not knowing that Alfred was watching the whole time.


    "Damn it! I don't want her in pain! This isn't fair." Alfred yelled quietly so no one would look at him weirdly. Alfred went after you to the roof and saw that you were singing and drawing with a smile on your face. Alfred blushed a little, he saw the beauty in you. You put down the sketch pad and started to dance around. You were giggling and smiling that no one has ever seen. You heard clapping a stopped, you looked and saw it was Alfred F. Jones.


    "Hey, why don't you show that to others?" Alfred said coming closer to you. You started to dash but you tripped over and your whole knee was bleeding, you whinced at the pain.


    "Oh god! Are you ok?" Alfred yelled running to you, you slapped his hadn that tried to help you up.


    "I'M FINE GOD DAMN IT!!!! Just...leave me alone...please...I'm in too much pain now." You said in a whimpering voice, you heard a sigh form Alfred and he picked you up bridal-style.


    "What are you doing you god damn idoit!!!" You yelled at him, you started to laugh.


    "You have a pretty voice ______. Why don't you talk?" Alfred said, you kept your mouth shut when everyone stared at you both because of this, there were whispers. You hoped that no one would make a damn rumor about you and Aflred.


    "Oh lookie, the little bitch is here with...oh, Alfred F. Jones." Ashely said, she was the group leader. You got out of Alfred's grasp and started to limp away.


    "Oh wait, _______-!"



    "Don't go after a loser like her. She can make it on her own." Ashley laughed, you had tears in your eye but made no sound.



    "Besides, your going to be going out with me." Ashley said, you turned around with your teary eyes with a glare.


    "THATS IT!!!!" You yelled walking back towards her.



    "I'm done with the fact you walked over me you fake boob, unflawless, bitch thinking that she cna do whatever she wants and never get away. Well guess what sweetie, its ends today." You said then slapped her, you walked away with the justice that you think you gotten. You felt great but never think you would talk after that. You went tp the nurses office to get your knee taken care of. All the teachers smiled at your words, they were true too. You were never bothered again and you didn't talk to Alfred or anyone for awhile and every, almost, went back to normal.

 


----Time Skip: A month later----





    You were on the roof of the building once again. You were dancing and gigggling by yourself. You heard the clapping once again, you blushed but you didn't walk away that time. You felt the footsteps come closer.


    "_______, what you did with Ashley, that was amazing. I heard stories of her from other people and they knew she was a bitch but no one stood up to her-" Alfred said turning you around.


    "-Until you did something that day _______. I also came up here to talk to you." Alfred said bringing your face closer to his.


    "I love you ______." Alfred said then suddently kissing you, you couldn't hide it anymore, you kissed him back with passion. You felt so happy, you didn't want him to let you go.


    "I love you too, Alfred F. Jones, will you...you know..." You said blushing a lot. Alfred chuckled and hugged you, you didn't knwo what to say.


    "Of course I will go out with you ______" He said and kissed you again, you finally had peace at the school. You found someone that truely loved you, someone that cared.  You were with a man you truely loved.

   "By the way _______." Alfred asked you.

   "Hm...?What is it?" You asked nicely to him.

   "Are you gonna be quiet again? Because thats a big turn on for men and I don't want you having men all over you." Alfred said, you bursted into laughing.

   "Dudette, I'm serious." Alfred said, you sitll kept laugh at him about it, he was very amusing and now, th eride of a relationship has just left. You wonder what adventures you and your lover will have.

 

                                                                              THE END

I haven't done an America fanfiction in a long time so I decided to write one again and its reallyy fun.
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ninjaofawesome Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Funny thing is I'm like one of the most lousiest people in my school XD this was awesome great job
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XxLisellexX Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2015
In class i'm awesome a ninja, that's quiet.
When i'm out with my friends i'm like one of the loudest people everyone's ever heard.

Soo... If quiet girls turn men on... Would I just have to be that loud mouth? Or... Yep. Gonna have to definitely talk more... ;)
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BlackHeart310 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This reminds me of my life..
Awesome story!!!!

P.S: my worst enemie is named Ashley!!
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lavenderglowangel Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
I only talk when required...except when I'm with a friend
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TheLionIncident Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015
I rarely talk so I must be sexy :{D
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Hetalianloverkiku Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
I did not know that silence was a turn on for men.......... I have got to start speaking more
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InsaneBlood1875 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
that was adorable and thay is how I act to people all the time. I am the ninja in the school or my teacher says the insane stalker XD
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Lois10Phantomhive Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2015
I'm the same in my school too. But not when my combat boots are on. They make me sound like I'm a giant when the heel makes contact with floor...
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Pikachoochoochoo Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Professional General Artist
At my school im quite but when I see my friends im like BITCHES IN THE HALLWAYS RUN I SEE MA BFFS RUN BITCHES RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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chica105 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
That is me except the bitches are hiding in the bathroom 
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MysticKyuubi24 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lol X'D
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Pikachoochoochoo Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Professional General Artist
Funny thing is I actually did that and didnt get in trouble my teachers supported me
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MysticKyuubi24 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lol! Nice Job :iconthumbsupplz:
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Pikachoochoochoo Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Professional General Artist
Yeahya
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MysticKyuubi24 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lol XD
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SoonToBeOtaku-Chan Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Being quite is a turn on? Then I must be sexy! XD :iconfabulousplz:
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sparklerthesableye Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep, that's me. Unless I'm hanging with my buddy Ryan. Then they probably think 'Bitch be crazy.'
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ElizabethDChartigan Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Almost everyone in deviart is shy, so we all must be sexy XD
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SoonToBeOtaku-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:iconsexyplz: Most certainly! XD
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ElizabethDChartigan Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Squidward-Sexy (Sexy Time) Sebastian Michaelis (Hawt Smile) [V1] Nathaniel icon we are sexy and we know it XD
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SoonToBeOtaku-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:iconraveplz:  Whoop! Whoop! :iconraveplz:
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ElizabethDChartigan Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lmao
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MysticKyuubi24 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Must be XD
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ichigosakura17 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
My favorite part:

"Don't go after a loser like her. She can make it on her own." Ashley laughed, you had tears in your eye but made no sound.



    "Besides, your going to be going out with me." Ashley said, you turned around with your teary eyes with a glare.


    "THATS IT!!!!" You yelled walking back towards her.



    "I'm done with the fact you walked over me you fake boob, unflawless, bitch thinking that she cna do whatever she wants and never get away. Well guess what sweetie, its ends today." You said then slapped her, you walked away with the justice that you think you gotten. You felt great but never think you would talk after that. You went tp the nurses office to get your knee taken care of. All the teachers smiled at your words, they were true too. You were never bothered again and you didn't talk to Alfred or anyone for awhile and every, almost, went back to normal.


And when reader-chan  walk away, either these two songs should play: www.youtube.com/watch?v=tfmDQW…, or www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vy5yeE…

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MysticKyuubi24 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think this would be better www.youtube.com/watch?v=csBaUs…
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ichigosakura17 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
oh yes! definitely! Pikachu Loves It Plz
or have pewds say you can't do s*** bro!
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MysticKyuubi24 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha yeah XD
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ichigosakura17 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
:XDface:
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Ageaus-Starburst Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks for usin meh emote!Don't forget to favourite
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ichigosakura17 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013
no problem
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MysticKyuubi24 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconawesomeplz:
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ichigosakura17 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013
XD
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MysticKyuubi24 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconpokeplz:
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agerose15 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
XDD

This reminds me of a stand off my friend had with the school bitch . . .It was funny though so I video tapped it along with some seniors doing one of those 80's work out section things! XDD
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MysticKyuubi24 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol
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agerose15 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
It was funny as hell! Believe me, I have some of the most awesomest friends ever!
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MysticKyuubi24 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! Doesn't everyone?
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agerose15 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
yes, yes they do!
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MysticKyuubi24 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Makes life funnier and awesomer,.. Maybe more than Prussia?
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agerose15 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Student Digital Artist
GASP~!!

Is it possible!?! To have something awesomer than Prussia!?!?!?!
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MysticKyuubi24 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Maybe...what does Prussia think about this?
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BBlover01 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Meraviglioso!!!!!!! :)
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MysticKyuubi24 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why thank you :3
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BBlover01 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Prego.
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MysticKyuubi24 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I really like this~! No love it~! 
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MysticKyuubi24 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you enjoyed it
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gothygermanchick Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This was so cute!! I am so glad I got to slap that bitch!! I am happy now!!!
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MysticKyuubi24 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha! I'm glad you enjoyed it
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gothygermanchick Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:)
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